Not only successful, but smooth

I just wanted to let you know that so far I have gotten into Marquette with a 20,000 dollar scholarship, UC Hastings, and most importantly Wisconsin. Wisconsin is the school that I told you all the way back when on our first phone call was the place I really wanted to get in. I even got 10,000 dollars in scholarship a year to Wisconsin as well. I really can’t thank you enough for all of your help, and I know that your help and reassurance not only helped me be successful but also made this process go as smoothly as it can.

(later…. ) Got into university of Illinois with an amazing 40,000 a year scholarship. Which I can only put down to how great and seamless my app was when you compare my numbers to their averages etc.