My Lawyer Mom Was Blown Away

My essay is great and the advice given was worth the money. I think I put my best foot forward. My mom (who is a lawyer and offered to buy this service for me when I blew the LSAT) agrees. I had asked her and her lawyer friends to look over my essay and they kept giving me the “it looks fine just fix these few grammar errors and you are set.” I wanted criticism about what the essay actually said: was it succinct? should I mention that in a law school essay?…those sort of questions. She was blown away by the final version of the PS. The waiting game begins and I am confident I’ll be happy when its over.